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Monday Morning



I wake, my bed mocking me as I find my way to the shower
And try to wash away the dreams from the night before



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Written June 13th, 2005

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  • Celtic Legend
    January 6, 2008

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    ugh monday mornings are terrible, especially if you had a bad dream sunday night. lol. unfortunately a shower ceases to wake me up! (but my dad works just fine!)


  • artis
    October 8, 2007
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    oh how often my bed pulls at me, as the day plays tug-o-war, and only the wet slippery water of the shower can free me....cute write.~Artis

  • ecrivain01
    February 13, 2006
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    I agree with your cheering section. Never wash away dreams.

    (Now nightmares would be a different thing, of course).

    Nice, short, sweet and to the point (even if I disagree with the point.)

  • Just4u
    June 13, 2005
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    Don't wash away those dreams...you may need them...especially on a
    Monday...lol...yep it's a shame some days we just can't sleep in and continue to dream...

    Hugs...Eddy


  • Annastacia
    June 13, 2005
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    Thank you for reading. I appreciate it so much.

  • Piercingvein16
    June 13, 2005
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    wow i love it. i have been there amazingly.

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