Friend
Touching
Heart and soul
Being there for
Me
Author notes
This is a very short form called the Lanturne. The Lanturne is a five-line verse shaped like a Japanese lantern with a syllabic pattern of one, two, three, four, one.
Written June 13th, 2005
A contest entry
- 100 Short Prewrites by Kari.
450 points, ended March 31, 2008, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Aw, this is soooo very true! This is really what a friend is
Very well done with this short write 
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I love this form of poetry, so much said in so few words. Great picture and such a suitable write to accompany it. Thanks for commenting on Garden Flowers this morning. Pleased you dropped in.
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What a wonderful verse to go along with this picture. Lanturnes are beautifully shaped forms of poetry, thi sone flowed so well and is so sincere and heartfelt as well.
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Thanks for the comments and taking the time to read. I appreciate the sweet comments.
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Beautifully written such a nice read.. Sherry
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This is just lovely! I love the pic and it goes perfectly with the words. So few words but they speak volumes! Youth and innocence to boot. I love it! Best Wishes and GOD BLESS~ Frog
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Wonderful
Truly, this is what makes a frioend. Lovely picture here to accompany this light hearted poem.
Charishma -
What a simple yet beautiful description of what a friend is in the truest sense of the word. Great picture you posted with this lantern.
Your pal, vj
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