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The Spring

*N*aturally flowing clean
  and sparkling crystal clear
*A*bound with voices of the birds
  singing until you appear
*T*empatures always remaining
  constant throughout the year
*U*nspoiled by the population growth
  you might even see a deer
*R*elishing the peace you float
  down the river without a soul near
*E*verlasting memories flood your mind
  as you pack up your gear

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Written June 12th, 2005

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  • Janice M Pickett
    August 1, 2005
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    Nature with all her glory is there in your words.
    A great acrostic. Very well done


  • Frogzter gold member
    July 30, 2005
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    This is one of the best acrostics that I have read in a while. It was so peaceful and vivid with imagery. The flow is impeccable. I've never been good at these, but it looks like you are natural! Kudos! By the way thanks for the wonderful comment you left on my poem. I really appreciate that and knowing that it had a positive effect on her made me feel good. Thanks so much!

  • Virginia Logsdon
    July 7, 2005
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    This is a lovely nature poem.You conveyed a lovely feeling of natures beauty in this write.


  • Touchof1der silver member
    June 18, 2005
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    This has such calm, soothing, tranquil feel to it. Almost like sitting high on a rock with the rushing of river water surrounding you, the sun beating down upon you, and the birds serenading you.


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    June 12, 2005
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    Whoa! Impressive. An acrostic that rhymes and carries such a serene feel to it. Such beauty and it reminds me of someplace, not so long ago within my mind. Very well done and I like the format of every other line, instead of one drawn out (which is usually the case) Bravo!


  • Ceilinh
    June 12, 2005
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    Ooooooo! An acrostic! I just wrote my first acrostic today. This is much prettier than mine. Excellent!!!

    -Ceilinh


  • lavender shadows
    June 12, 2005
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    Nice acrostic! Normally the ones I read (and write!) are the main letter of each line. I find it really creative that you chose every second line!

    I really enjoyed reading this poem. There was a fresh quality to it that I can't quite describe! You worded this beautifully.

    Good job! Good luck in the contest!

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    June 12, 2005
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    A very serene feel to this, your wording places us at ease. Wonderfully done.
    Edited on Jun 12, 8:17 p.m. because 'Because I entered too quick.'.

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