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Broken Hearts, Mended Ways

How many times have I waited on your reply?
I was sittin waiten, while life passed me by.
Little did I know, you were out at a dance,
Touchin her, dreamin of gettin in her pants...

Oh, I may be
Only 13
But i've felt heartbreak
Oh, oh

You hurt me
You broke my heart,
Now I will rise from the di-irt

You broke my heart
I cried for days
I didnt eat
Didnt sleep

Oh

Now your gone
You cheated on me
I broke up with you
And you pleaded to get back with me-e

Now -
No
No, o
I wont hate you
No - o - o - o

You may
have made be die
But now I know never to depend completely one one single person again

You broke my heart
Day after day
But I thank you now
Cause you
Mended
My
Ways

Author notes

Now, I know its not that good of poetry at all, but it isnt supposed to be all that good. It just shows my feelings - about this guy... Yeah.. ttyl
Written June 12th, 2005

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  • gprcrower
    June 15, 2005
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    NO ONE BETTER BE GETTING IN YER PANTS.

    I will choke them to death.


  • June 12, 2005
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    I for one think this is rather unique and interesting. I know you said it is not good..but I beg to differ. I think it is really good. Keep writing.


  • Salt of Earth
    June 12, 2005
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    I LOVE THIS! Especially the last few lines. Keep up the good work!
    ~Kasey