It's so clear
I am blue and you are white
Blue is wrong and white is right
But white is a color you can see through
Blue is different; blue is true
White is so blank, needing something more
Blue has depth, layered to the core
White is the page onto which one grows
Blue is the soul, already exposed
White is nothing, empty, and vast
Blue is strong; blue will last
White I was, but blue I became
Blue I've been, and blue I'll remain
I
am
blue
Author notes
I'm blue... figure it out
Written June 12th, 2005
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"Blue is the soul, already exposed"
There's a deep connection between the words "Soul" and "Exposed" here, that I've never noticed before. This is raw.
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Just returning the comment! I really liked this a lot; I liked how you used colors to describe your relationship with other people. I think the metaphor works, especially since your username is "Blue" lol. I liked that it rhymed too, it didn't sound forced at all, and that takes some talent, which you have a ton of! This is awesome! Never give in, Annandhel.
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so i'm pretty sure i haven't visited this site in forever and a half... so long that i got one of those "allpoetry misses you" emails... so i came on to see.. and i saw that this was your most recent (haha like 6 months ago!) poem.. so i'll comment! i luurve it! it's so creative... you amaze me
you make blue so... true! and not sad, like it usually is associated. i love it! keep it up 
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I think I am blue too!!
YAY BLUE PEOPLE!! -
this is really good!!! nice explanation! wow... I can't get over how much I love this poem!!! I love the comparisons! GREAT JOB AMANDA!!! take care babe!
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i think this is really good. i especially liked
"White is a page onto which one grows,
blue is the soul, already exposed."
i think this is excellent. it's a great poem. you are awesome poet, i'll defintally be looking at more of your work. -
OH AMANDA!!! well done sweetheart! i'm so proud of you! this was so good, your contrasts were so .. fresh, and like nothing i've read lately. i loved it. you are such a great poet! kind of like describing yourself, but not. lol. sorry for blabbing on. ~abbie
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Ohhh... thats good. No big flowery words or ramblinG vaugenes, just meaning. eXcelent
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thanks so much john. i really value your opinion and it means a lot to hear good stuff from you, so thanks
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Hot damn girl that's pretty deep... like blue! haha That was really really good. You have an awesome talent and could mold words that could melt the soul, warm the heart, stretch the mind, and bring tears to the eyes of many. I am very proud of you and amazed by your writing. I have to read yours more often. Keep writing girl. Peace out :-D
God Bless,
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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! I really really like this for some reason. It had such a great flow to it and it gives us some insight into the possible meaning/motive to your username. I loved this I really did. Your words just rolled off my tongue, it went together perfectly. Great Job. I really should start writing some poetry for the summer but this summer I am working on a book so when I get an urge to write, I go to my book... Oh well, I will write one soon. You have inspired me! NeVER stop writing- you were given a gift and GOD WANTS YOU TO USE IT! So keep writing!!!!!!!
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CRIP!!! way to go
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