In a meadow,
by a stream
two lovers
are together…
A blanket is laid out
for their picnic
for two…
The stream’s water
flows by
romantically babbling…
Their eyes are
upon each other,
words spoken softly…
Hearts are together,
hands held…
Two who were lonely,
are no longer…
Electricity is in the air
for love is shared
between them…
Words of desire are exchanged
special feelings abound…
© Jonathan Wikkins November 6, 2001
Revised March 6, 2008
All Rights Reserved
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Written November 6th, 2001
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really beautiful write here. nothing like having that connection and feeling it throughout your entrie being for the one you love. I really loved this one
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a beautiful picnic splendar!
great imageary, I see you have a grand imagination
thanks for sharing
may you find comfor and peace within your day
Tamara -
You have captured a special moment.I loved it.
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Aweeeeee sounds like true love......:o) And what could be a better and more soothing place to fall in love? In a meadow by a stream, I can almost hear the streams flow on a summers afternoon, soft breeze and all.....What a ramantic....Nice write Whonrock!! Smiles you way :o)>>>>>>sandy/San-d
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loved it
beautiful
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