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drink

drink
drink me in
see who i am
and who i've bin
leave
leave me alone
im here now and finally
it feels like home
faded, faded
drunk and jaded
i am not me
i am you now
faded, faded
my life was wasted
kiss me softly
lay me back down

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sry havent written in ages this might blow
Written June 11th, 2005

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  • XXxPuNkAsSxXx
    June 11, 2005
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    wow i really enjoyed this one.. keep up the good work.. its so put together and so unique.. keep writitng like this it will take u far in life