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A note from me to you

You have made my life terrible

So I have decided
That this life isn't worth living
Because if I died tomorrow you wouldn't notice

So I will take the waiting out of it
I will be in peace
Because you wont be able to torment me

I will kill my pain forever
Even though you can kill me on the inside slowly
This blade can kill me a lot faster

So as my final question I will ask
Would anyone notice if I was gone?

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Written June 11th, 2005

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  • Kimmehh
    June 19, 2005
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    HELL YES I WOULD NOTICE DAMIT!
    stop cutting.
    ~kim, i care DAMN IT!


  • Fayt2o6
    June 13, 2005
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    oOoOo so strong! It's powerful! Truely good. And you were right, you do make it look longer!