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If I Could Find A Reason.

Intro.
(whispered)
I know that you're still here,
but it's killin me inside
I cried so many tears
that I just want to die.

Verse 1
If I could find a reason-
to hold on
I'll be waiting for that time to come-
then I wouldn't be alone
If I could find a way to-
keep my hopes alive
I won't be lettin go
I wouldn't have to cry

Chorus
I walk alone and wonder-
What there is;
that lies ahead
I keep moving backwards,
with so many tears that-
I've bled
And I keep askin myself-
if you ever will come back
I cry myself to sleep
Confused to where I'm at.

Verse 2
If I could find a reason-
to know it's not me to blame
I wouldn't be tryin to hide-
all of this pain
But I know that it's not real
that it's only another dream-
I feel.

Chorus
I walk alone and wonder-
What there is;
that lies ahead
I keep moving backwards,
with so many tears that-
I've bled
And I keep askin myself-
if you ever will come back
I cry myself to sleep
Confused to where I'm at.

(Spoken)
If I could find a reason-
to wake up
I wouldn't be so scared
I would finally realize what-
life is made of

Chorus
I walk alone and wonder-
What there is;
that lies ahead
I keep moving backwards,
with so many tears that-
I've bled
And I keep askin myself-
if you ever will come back
I cry myself to sleep
Confused to where I'm at.

Yeah, and I keep askin myself-
if you ever will come back.

Author notes


Written June 11th, 2005

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  • June 11, 2005
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    Excellent

    This was a very special poem. I enjoyed reading it vewry much. This poem had great depth and great magination. You are a very gifted poetess for being so young. Keep writng and God Bless--


  • bw43
    June 11, 2005
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    nice. sounds like a chart topping rock/goth type song! keep on writing. this was beautiful. i hope you find a reason... a reason to be happy, instead of always so sad.

  • Gosia
    June 11, 2005
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    I know the feeling. I love the crying tears of blood part... I haven't heard that before, it's original - this whole poem is. Loneliness, fear, despair.. all conveyed really well in this poem, I have nothing to criticise about the form or anything because that was all fine, the content was the part that came through and it sounds great. Hold on in there. X