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Living Fountain

When I've traveled through the desert
And my thirst is blazing strong,
Quench me not with worldly wells,
For these are not the drink I long.

Let me find the Living Fountain,
Never-ending, free for ALL;
Fill me, and then let me dance,
SOAKED beneath its waterfall!

Author notes

Well... I was just thinking about how refreshing reading my Bible can be when I haven't picked it up for awhile... and just reading a little bit ALWAYS makes me want SO MUCH MORE!  I want to be SATURATED with it!
Written June 11th, 2005

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  • jjbreunig3
    March 15, 2007

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    An enjoyable piece...

    An enjoyable piece; without doubt, we need to remain submerged in the Living Waters of Christ; good job. --Joe


  • heismysong
    July 14, 2005
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    Right back at ya!

  • Reflected Light
    July 14, 2005
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    Natalie, I love you.


  • agalford7053
    June 12, 2005
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    I really like this. Its really cute. Because you don't just want any water.. you want God's water.