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Eternal Family

We arrived alone and a bit scared.
We talked.....
We cried......
We laughed.....

We have been through hell.....
And from the depths of hell we have risen.

By earth, wind, fire, and water, we have found each other.
May the love and light from Goddess shine upon each of us.
May she guide us in our travels, journeys and lives.

Together now, Friends ,here we stand bonded......
bonded as family......together for eternity.









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Written June 11th, 2005

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  • Swan song gold member
    November 23, 2007

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    This poem I think gives a refelction into a wonderful soul. Someone who values family but has also been through the storm and survived throiugh adversity.
    Very well done


  • safiya
    November 17, 2007
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    This is beautiful


  • Sunkissedrose
    June 12, 2005
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    this was beautiful. I wish I had more to say on this..but anything I could say would pale in comparison. Nice to see you writing again.
    ~Carrie


  • Gwenevere
    June 12, 2005
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    Lovely write.to be part of an eternal family.Wonderful