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How quickly it happened.

Three years of marriage and all was well
all of sudden two days ago you put me through hell

It only took 30 minutes to destroy my heart
only 30 little minutes to tear us apart

You threw me around, and into some walls
Turned your family against me with harassing phone calls

Three years down the drain in the blink of an eye
You turned my love to hate and I want to know why?

My thought is you're 24, and wish to be single
you want no responsibilities and with friends to mingle.

A husband and father of two you pretend,
to have no family ties and just hang out with friends.

WEll this father's day over your present you'll delight
I'm telling you honey, divorce papers are within sight.

Author notes

For more in depth detail about how "good" we were read my piece entitled "Three years"  this suddenly changed two nights ago when my husband literally threw me into some walls and what not...so now I am proceeding with divorce. He didn't want responsibilty...so I'm giving him exactly that. Breaking all ties that bind. Hope you enjoy!!
Written June 11th, 2005

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  • Delicate Fire Water
    December 7, 2005
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    Oh My Freaking God!!!! Nicole, I'm so sorry, I wish I could of been here for you... I feel so bad now. Please forgive me. I'm sorry to say this, but I hope your ex burns in hell. Any man/woman that beats up the other sex should be burned in hell. I'm here if you need me, my e-mail address is CFLA01@sjlhs.suffolk.sch.uk. It's my school address, but it's the only one that I can get on at school. I've missed you heaps, how's Rayshy, and Eli??? I bet they are growing up fast now aren't they? It's been so long since I've spoken to you. i love you hunni,

    ~*~Stephi~*~


  • ShatteredSilverStar
    July 6, 2005
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    i am so sorry to hear that, i hope u r okay? i am happy that u got away from him though. when i was 17 i had a abuse b/f he was verbally abusive more than anything, and i left him, the scary thing is , i was supposed to marry him..wahh


  • Momof4
    June 15, 2005
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    I like this nicole. its purty good!..lol....and yea i hope you actually do go through with it!


  • silver bugs
    June 15, 2005
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    Aw, I'm really sorry this happened Nicole, but you deserve so much better. NOBODY should be treated like this, and you have kids to think of. I'm glad you are doing something about it because some women are too scared. So well done! And this poem was awesome
    I miss you!!

    Lotsa looney love
    ~Lana


  • Eeyores Buddy
    June 12, 2005
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    Bug!!!!! Tell me i didn't just read this...
    Seriously... If he loved you, he wouldn't of done this at all.. No matter how angry or whatever he may have been... I tell you... if i was in your position i wouldn't of had the divorce papers in sight... I would of thrown them at him! Lol but thats just me. You deserve better by the sounds of it. But I hope your children didn't see it... I really hope they didn't... I know it maybe hard.. but you gotta be strong for the kids aswell.
    We are all here for you bug
    Hugs,
    Katy - bug


  • joliemere
    June 12, 2005
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    Yeah it just all of a sudden happened. So I haven't "been" going through it. I just went through it and said to hell with it and booted his ass to the door. lol Thanks for the comments.

    love you girl
    Nicole

  • joliemere
    June 12, 2005
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    Yeah I'm strong. *is super woman* lol Thanks for the comments Danny. Nice to know I have people here that I can count on.

  • joliemere
    June 12, 2005
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    I'm okay. He "says" he still loves me, but if you love someone you would never hurt them. So I ignore him..lol Thanks for the comments lauren. Glad I have friends here to talk to.


  • ElegantlyWasted
    June 12, 2005
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    Bloody heck Nic. <3 I've missed you heaps lately; never would have guessed this was happening to yah Like Dan said, you're a strong woman, bound to be even stronger after all of this.

    Love yaz hun 's.
    // Kal.


  • Danny VooDoo
    June 12, 2005
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    if you need to talk anytime my msn addy is T_Rex_gonna_bite_ya@hotmail.co.uk. i can't believe what i've just read, i hope your physical injuries are ok nicole, i know the damage caused to your heart will take longer to heal and we'll be here to help you in any way we can. i can't believe he hit you no women deserves that and especially not someone who i class as 1 of my most special friends.
    you'll get through this nicole i've always thought of you as a strong woman and with a little help from your friends we'll help you look to a brighter future.

    Danny


  • xtootiex
    June 11, 2005
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    omg nicole are u oks hun? he hurt u? omg im so sorry. i cant believe he did that. doesnt he love u anymore? this is so sad. awww nicole. i wish i could speak to u to see what is happening

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