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I wandered,

I wandered

I wandered, lonely as a cloud,
The reason why is clear to see,
I have B.O., and that is why,
A cloud of flies hangs over me.


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Just a little ditty to try and make you titter.
Written June 11th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • LovedByTheOne
    June 12, 2005
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    this is short and funny. i should show this to my mom. she thinks that all i write about is death and that there's only poems about death on this site. she drives me crazy. well anyways...good write. keep writing.
    jen


  • AranC
    June 11, 2005
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    Thank you.


  • Jesus Freak 101
    June 11, 2005
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    That was cool! That made me smile also. Thanks for that....good luck in the contest!


  • pixelated nonsense
    June 11, 2005
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    And do you wonder why those flies are following you? here: hands you deoderant Now you spray this on...well for you, just spray it all over your body...and the flies should go away
    Thanks for entering, Aran. You did make me smile.
    Kate