There's nothing left to feel
you're just an empty shell
you cant even remember
when you finally fell
it seem like you forgot to feel
and now your numb to the pain
lack of anger makes you restless
lack of feelings keeps you sane
morbid desires control your body
deathly images fill your head
nothing left to live for
lack of emotions keeps you dead
yet silently you felt the pain
and your fate you finally seal
tears rolling down your cheeks
cause you know you'll never heal
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Written June 11th, 2005
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Dude, I thought you claimed to be a bad poet! This is a great write, it grabbed my and dragged me along, well structured rhytm and rhyme.
A great dark poem. -
wow this one really spoke to me. i love it. great write. i look forward to reading more of your works. take care later
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