State of Confusion
I'm in a state of confusion,
He loves,he loves me not,
Yesterday he loved me,but...
Today,he may want me to rot.
I never know how he feels,
it changes day to day,
More like minute to minute,
as long as everything goes his way.
It's so hard to keep my sanity,
in this insane world I lead.
Today he wants to make me his wife,
but tonight he may want me to leave.
He's a dominating freak,
always has to have control,
So this makes me very weak,
and confuses me to my very soul!
How can he love me today,
and hate me tomorrow?
He confuses me in every way,
when he says "No pain or sorrow".
How can I love a man,
that treats me this way?
Loves me one moment,
then wants me to go away!
By,Broken Rose69
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Written June 11th, 2005
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I actually like this poem. I like how it is written, and I like what it is talking about. My mother, She has a man just like that. And I swear I want to rip his heart out for how he makes her feel and what he does and says to her, to make her feel that way.
I think this is a good poem, not everyone has to hide the meanings in their poetry and sound 'hoytee toytee'...and not every poet wants to be or sound like an intellectual. I disagree with Ascatchem..I do not think it sounds childish at all.
Sel~ -
this poem has excellent potential however, it sounds sort of childish...try using more figurative language and make your audience dig for your meaning
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