With many nights loving, you said you would stay
Will you drown all my passions I had for you?
Can you pack your bags and still go away?
will you look into your soul now I am through?
You walk away from our many nights of bliss
how could you go without again looking back?
Don't you want to stay now for our last kiss?
Why now my lady your trust you had you now lack?
Loving again for us you say that is now missing
How do you know you don’t long for us as much?
stay in my arms and look adoring my darling
Hold my hand and say you want to know my touch.
Do you know how much magic is in your touch?
How you took away my long mournful nights!
To hold you in my arms again, is that too much?
Don’t walk away! Wait ‘til our passion fills our nights.
Author notes
No E's
this was hard to do, but I did it, I think! will still work on it. 
Written June 10th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- E by Maddiebean.
450 points, ended June 16, 2005, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is really great. The A and E are the most used of the vowels I think, and it would be extremely hard to write without using both or leaving out either of the two. You did a wonderful job on this.
Deke--See I couldn't even sign my name without using one of them, and if I was singing my birth name I would have to use both. -
you very very bad girl.. and i hate you
.. you always tend to make mistakes ?? 
.. first you make my jenni.. spell as jenny.. .. and then you make my jonnifor.. jonnofor.. .. whats wrong with ya madam.. alive or dead.. slow mind.. 
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Thank you my dear friend VIC your lovely comment I do adore, I'm glad you like it, and I even Rhymed...is good hey
I tell you Vic it was very hard to do, but I enjoyed the Challenge.
Love hug and kisses
JONNOFOR
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sorry my comment wasnt like my usuall one.. but i tried my best to keep the comment rid of "E's" .. hope u like my comment . i tried..
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend...... just keep it up... your humble little friend......
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....... ........ - vic ( who else?)
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5 stars *****
wow jonnifor.. this work is good.. infact its good to watch a girl think so profound ... yup i got more mass on GIRL
.. that too a girl who has a slow mind .. jk okay??
but damn you made your mind work in this part of your work...
but i cudnt find any "Vic" in this part..
and no "Jonnifor" too
.. that is unfair.. but damn i am happy and glad to study this work..
luv ya..
miss ya..
your luv.. - vic
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A love poem without the e. Bravo!!This was very wewritten and I enjoyed the theme. Best luck in this contest!There are so many good poems here!!!
Be happy, have fun, and make it a greta day!
ZZZ
Linda
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Thank you ghostly,it wasn't easy, believe me, but it certainly is a challenge, I am still looking at it, changing words to make more sense.
Hugs
Jenni -
O.o Wow that's one heck of a challenge. I'd mess up on this one for sure. I think you did a pretty darn good job. That wasn't easy, I bet. Great work, keep it up! Blessed Be.
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THank you AJ it was quite a challenge, I'm still working on it, to make proper sense of it without using any E's
Love Jenn -
wow, that was fantastic poem..didn't notice no E's untill i read your comment...what a challenge..this was very passionate indeed Jenn..good luck in the contest
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excellent
WOW what a challenge and how well you did it. A beautiful poem with not an e in sight. Thats hard. Great work and well done
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