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Dear Lala

Left behind by the ones you loved
either from heartache
or god took them up above
Lala started this group
when i heard i wanted to join
with losing so many loved ones
i couldn't offer anything no points, or even gold coins
but she let me in
with wide open arms
this group is full of love
and good luck charms
she keeps everyone updated
on events and games
i know I'm not active
but yet she provably still remembers my name
we are both going through a rough patch
as i know she is there for me
as i am for her
we are friends meant to be
so THANK YOU for letting me in
Ive made many friends
all because of you lala
shes a beautiful person, and leader
so thank you again for running around each corner, each bend
to keep  this group running
which I'm sure we are all grateful
xxxxxxx xxxxxx
                   3 cheers for all leaders
              hip hip hooray hip hip hooray hip hip hooray

Author notes

'You might have forgotten about me, but I remember'
Written June 10th, 2005

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  • LaAmyaArlene
    June 28, 2005
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    Awe, this was so sweet hun Thank you so much for this poem. Love ya lots

    LaLa ♥


  • ICaughtFire
    June 13, 2005
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    Aw thank you I got a cheer for being a leader
    This is a great poem to LaLa. She deserves people to care about her and SHOW IT. You did a beautiful job here showing how appreciative you are of lovely LaLa. Good luck.
    -x-


  • Jess-xx
    June 11, 2005
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    aww this was so sweet...its so cool you and her are true friends and i wish you the best of luck with your friendship..and good luck in the contest!