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A Little Poem..{Her Sorrow Turned Happiness}

We go hand in hand, running together.
You promise me the stars, you say its forever.
We have the best of times in such a short day,
I give you a kiss, as you take my breath away.

Lets dance into the sky,
Without saying the departing words of good-bye.
What if this day turns into darkness?
With our dance what if it turns out to be just a mess?

You persuade me with happiness,
Your fingers tell me of your gentleness.
The thoughts of misfortune seem to seep away,
Causing me to fall into a blissful state of array.

Author notes

I just wrote this in a second,
trying to remember things that I forgot, but well I decided to make it a bit longer then the first four lines so here it is, little piece, don't hate me for such bad stuff X_X!
Written June 10th, 2005

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  • Envy
    September 11, 2005
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    Beautiful honey