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SleepLess Night

Last night i couldn't sleep
After that phone call
I got so weak
Tears flowing down my face
Friends saying "Its gonna be ok"
Are they sure? They said that last time
And nothing was ok
I done understand
Every time something good comes in my life
It gets taken away
Causing me so much Pain
I need to sleep
But its so hard
I need your love
To feel safe at night
God help me with all this pain
And stop my Sleepless night

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Written February 23rd, 2006

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  • Hidden Fortress
    August 9, 2005
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    Let me cry... just let me cry... I love this poem... its so true... thank you for commenting on one of mine.... I love your writing... so original