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My Gifts from God!

My Gifts From God!

                  I am the luckiest woman I know,
                      to have two of the greatest gifts from God!
                  My children,Savannah & Abigail,
                      which aren't at all odd!

                  They have blessed me everyday,
                      since their births.
                  They have shown me all of lifes worths!

                  I can never explain to them,
                      how much they mean to me,
                  But without them,there would be no need!

                  For when everything looks so dark & grim,
                      I think of them.
                  Everything so sad,just fades away,
                      and I can go on with a brand new day!

                  They are my sunshine,
                      on a cloudy day.
                  And I promise to them,
                      I will NEVER go away!

                  I have never known such love before,
                      a love so strong,you could never ignore!

                  So,I should Thank You Dear Lord,
                      for my gifts from above.
                  For all of the laughs,
                      and unconditional Love!

                I love you girls! And I hope you both know this!

                                      By,Broken Rose69

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Children are true gifts from God!
Written June 10th, 2005

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  • Dj Djox
    June 10, 2005
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    wow diz iz a great write keep it up


  • CrimsonMist
    June 10, 2005
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    that is true! children are true gifts from God! keep up the great work.
    Much love,
    ~Jessi