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Questions of a Submissive

How do you like it?
Are you a soft and gentle Master
Or a cold  unyielding Lord?
Will you treat me to pains
And pleasures alike;
Those I am familiar
And those I'd like to explore?
Do you have the patience
To teach me new things?
Can you watch me,
Learn my subtle clues?
Listen to my words, my heart?
Talk to me, I will listen.
Listen to me, I will obey.

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Written June 10th, 2005

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  • noel lovett
    June 10, 2005
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    seductive and submissive/both, either or, very well written and I know this comes from a free and open woman of women