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Moving on

Today is bleak, never doubt it,
but trust in tomorrow.
Today is hard to fathom, hard to comprehend,
but trust in tomorrow.

Gone is the love you once trusted,
betrayal is the new word for today.
But hope is a new word to learn,
to trust in and gain new insight.

Give up not my children,
tomorrow is another day.
Trust in your heart to find,
the answers that are just beyond your reach.

Leave behind your doubts and fears
and reach for the promise to come.
An ending is only a beginning,
who's call has not yet been heard.

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Written June 10th, 2005

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  • Image and Visions silver member
    October 25, 2005
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    Julia, thanks for the uplifting message you've left us with. It speaks strongly of someone who can share a message like this in the midts of personal trails. thanks. thank you also for commenting on my work. I also hope your road ahead is too rough. image and Visions


  • CrimsonMist
    June 10, 2005
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    wow!!! very well written! this is a great poem. i really like it. Keep up the great work. ~Jessi