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Seven Deadly Sins

you have pride
because you believe in yourself
you envy
because you look up to others
you commit gluttony
because you want to experience everything
your lust full
because your human
your angry
because those you love do wrong
your greedy
because society encourages it
your a sloth
because the world managers without you

the seven deadly sins?

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Written June 10th, 2005

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  • Caiwena
    June 10, 2005
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    ooo... interesting. This is really cool. The repitition is effective, and flows really well. Great poem
    Edited on Jun 10, 11:16 because ''.