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Simply Love,

As tears begin to fall; while missing you;
Memories linger in my mind; of us together,
Remembrance of your sweet touch,
With a breath taking kiss.
Your voice echo’s in my head,
Three words were said,
Eyes closed; holding onto what was heard,
I hope and pray you can only hear me.
Tears come with a smile when I think about you,
Wishing for my eyes to meet with yours once again,
A gentle touch across your face,
While hand in hand.
A kiss to the cheek,
With a sudden taste of your lips,
As my memory of our togetherness fades,
The night comes to an end,
Where I find myself waking up,
From another nights dream; to find simply love.

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Blah, another write...
Written June 9th, 2005

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  • iamfromabove
    August 11, 2005
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    A beautiful write of what seems to be a beautiful dream
    this had such a bittersweet feel to it
    Mia


  • Simple Reminder
    June 23, 2005
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    josh i really liked this poem...your really good. you see, to have a lot of friends on here buddy i just put up some new stuff if you wanna look i love you buddy!


  • Lori1952
    June 19, 2005
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    Josh.. this is truly fantastic... Well written! Love the ending. you outdid yourself on this one...
    Smiles Hugs Lori


  • silverlining
    June 18, 2005
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    Hey Josh.. interesting poem you've got here. I love the way the words look, spread out upon the page. My favourite lines would have to be the last ones... "Where I find myself waking up, From another nights dream; to find simply love.". Well done, nice write. Loook forward to reading more of your work in the future. Nice write

  • KittenThrasher
    June 18, 2005
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    This is a wonderful piece, really. Beautiful and sweet. It flows and is told extremely well. Kudos, kudos! Keep up the good work!

  • sfhfghfgsgsf
    June 18, 2005
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    :D

    Very nice job, i like how the text looks, and how it flows. Poetry isn't just about the words, its about appearance and tact, and you definitly have learned to use it correctly.

    Very good job.


  • Blazing White Wolf
    June 18, 2005
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    aww this is a beautiful sweet poem with nice flow and good imagary you did a very nice job on this one
    love and light
    blazee

  • sexypixie05
    June 10, 2005
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    This is a really good poem. It's beautiful! Keep up the excellent work!

  • babeygirlfranny
    June 10, 2005
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    i love this poem good job!

  • Confined princess
    June 10, 2005
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    great

    Awww... It is so beautiful. This poem is wonderfully written. I love the way that you describe everything so that you can understand what you are talking about. Keep up the good work. I love this poem.

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