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It's All Up To You

I've finally found somebody
that I can talk to, love & kiss.
but that doesn't really matter.
It's all up to you.
I've finally found somebody
that I can hold,
write my poetry to,
and sweet memories
just thinking of how it might be
but that doesn't matter.
it's all up to you.
Why do i say it doesn't matter
when it does?
Simply what I'm trying to say
is that to love someone
is to give of yourself
completely and freely.
And I care very deeply.
So I give my life to you.
but it doesn't really matter.
it's all up to you.
think my pretty babe
and someday your dreams will come true.
I hope that you love me
the way I love you.
But it doesn't really matter.
It's all up to you.

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Written June 9th, 2005

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  • sidewinder silver member
    March 31, 2006
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    for those who are having problems reading my poetry because of the size of the lettering...which is contrasted against the back ground...go to the top of your screen... click View... there you can change the size of the lettering to be able to read it


  • astralshepherd gold member
    August 10, 2005
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    this is really very touching and tender. having read almost everything you’ve written here i'd say you have a lot to offer in any relationship, whether as a casual acquaintance or an intimate. I hope you find your special one. Blessings and best wishes, ~richard


  • Touchof1der silver member
    June 10, 2005
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    Some people think loving someone means you have to "fix" them or reshape and remold them in what you want them to be... I use to feel angry when someone would do that... now I just feel sorry because they will never know the greatest gift a true love. And when two people can't agree and come to terms as a couple... it's time to move on. This is a wonderful thought Bill.
    ♥ Kimberly
    Edited on Jun 10, 1:56 p.m. because ''.