Daniellia= angel 666 come out to play....
Me= go away...
Daniellia= it'll be the death of me if you do...
Me= *laughs* now we're talking.... *starts walking to stage*
Welcome to my court.
Are you sure you want to stay
I can get wicked when I want to play
Your heaven is my hell
My hell is your heaven
Before tonight is done
I’m sure your gonna scream...
*Gets on stage*
This is a mock trial
And we're here to debate
Whether I am Satan
Or am I a saint??
These horns hold up my halo
A regular devil in disguise
My shirt too tight
My skirt a little high
I smile wide with innocence
A glimmer in my eyes
Pucker up and close your eyes
Don’t be afraid to die
For the kiss I’ll give you
Will surely poison your mind
The demons at my back
God by my side
Author notes
i wrote this with my ex girlfriend daniellia when we were in the same band... this is only most of it... i'll add the rest to it when i find where i put it lol... please tell me what you think
Written June 9th, 2005
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Great write
I liked the way that you used spiritual imagery here, to create such a dark piece Keep writing, this was an excellent poem which I liked a lot
All the best,
Pozo
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I really thought that this was good. I loved the whole thing. The imagery you used in it and I think that it would make a great song. I have to say that the last four lines were my favorite 'For the kiss I’ll give you/Will surely poison your mind/The demons at my back/God by my side' Those were great lines. Something orgional, something I've never read or heard before and I loved it. This wasn't cliche at all and that's what made it great, I hope to read more from you soon. And I have to say that when you put the rest of it on here that it will only make it that much more greater. Keep writing -Heather
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