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My Dark World

Rust covers the walls
Bourbon stains the floor
Whiskey bottles line
The mouldy shelves

Angel dust and opium baggies
Marijuana and heroine lay
By the bottles of gin and
Tequila bottles by the sink

This place is abandoned
Has been for years
I left my dark world for
The real world

Vladd
-For my druggie friends who have done stuff to not be druggies!

Author notes

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okay a really stupid poem for a dumb world
*sighs*
Written June 9th, 2005

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  • AlyssaEngaged
    June 26, 2005
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    wow ima show this to some ppl i know this was really really good(as usual) keep it up-alyssa