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Make It Hurt

The dark side's callin' now, nothin' is real
He'll never know just how I feel
From out of the shadows he walks like a dream
Makes me feel crazy, makes me feel so mean

Make it hurt so good
Come on baby make it hurt so good
Sometimes love don’t feel like it should

Ain't nothing gonna save you from a love that's blind
When you slip to the dark side you cross that line
Don't you play too cool Don't get too smart
Just give it what you got Im the kind that like it hot

Make it hurt so good
Come on baby make it hurt so good
Sometimes love don’t feel like it should

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Written June 9th, 2005

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  • MystifiedPoet
    June 9, 2005
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    You didn't follow the rules...so this is disqualified. The rules clearly state that you need to put the # and that rappin s your life in the auhtors comment. Sorry.