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Earthly Hell

Come forth, the broken windows ring
Of dire hatred, of everything.
Pain and strife and more to see
Shall live and grow and move and be.
The untouched stain of heartless sin
Fill the heart and mind within.
Until the light arise no more
And life it lives as blood and gore.
Awaken night and command the rise
Of scandal, deceit, betrayal, lies
While security becomes and intangible dream
All becomes more lethal than it may seem.
When it began, it was secret and small
But now it's the world, all in all.
But then mankind had the choice
But no one had courage to raise a voice.
Now the world's gone to hell
Would you be silent just as well?

Author notes

When evil reigns, who stands against it?
Written June 9th, 2005

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  • WisdomWarrior
    June 2, 2006
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    Well Done!!

    This is an awesome, awesome, message!! "Would you be silent just as well?"

    Excellent!! I hope you read this at poetry readings. This is sooooo needed and needed to be heard.

  • SpriteInDisguise
    June 30, 2005
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    Holy.. shizzle...

    The rhyming in this is furcking insane... and the rythm... *bows down to Poetry God*

    IM me sometime if you like. SpriteInDisguise


  • skitza
    June 14, 2005
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    I loved this poem. It made me want to keep reading it!! How do you mean by 'evil' though? I'm interested to know what this is about!
    'Come forth, the broken windows ring
    Of dire hatred, of everything.
    Pain and strife and more to see
    Shall live and grow and move and be.'
    Amazing poem!!

    Skitza


  • untilXyouXfade
    June 10, 2005
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    WOW

    this is very good!!! again you are an amazing writer. my favorite lines are:
    While security becomes and intangible dream
    All becomes more lethal than it may seem.
    : would you stand against it??