I fell in love with a man beyond my wildest dreams
I adore him, he is everything I want it seems,
he gave me the love I have been seeking forever
I have known true happiness like no other.
Visions of life together kept me enthralled with him
I love this man, would call him on the slightest whim,
my friends would say to me ‘he’s not what he appears!
He’s not worth your time, your love, your tears.’
How could the love we feel for each other be wrong?
When I’m wrapped in his arms it’s where I belong,
they don’t see the tender side of him that I know;
to the end of the earth with him I would follow.
Am I wrong to put my trust in him so completely?
when he looks at me with love ever so sweetly,
he is the man I intend to live my life with, to marry.
Forever from that day on I’ll be his darling Jenny.
Author notes
just a fantasy ufortunately 
He’s not worth your time, your love, your tears has been added
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Wasted tears by Wisdom World
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A lost friendship"
Written June 9th, 2005
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300 points, ended June 15, 2005, 5 entries
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This is a wonderfully written piece, I dont think it is wrong for someone to love someone that their friends dont approve of...like my sister always tells me.. you are going to see the passionate, loving and sweet side of him that he is never going to show to your friends because they are not intimate with him. Men most times come off gruff on the outside to people.. but when you are in love and you know them more deeply then you can understand both sides of them and not just the one that is .. well of male nature I guess you would say.
great job on this
Love,
Kid -
awww
awww this was great.
love is sooo fun!! i love love poems. (did that sound right??)
this was great.
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beautifully written! i really enjoyed this piece! its a shame its only a fantasy...you made it sound so real! you kept the rhyme up well and i liked how your piece had a bit of a story to it. great job with this! and always keep writing good luck in the contest! *kat~~~
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Thank you Jan for the wonderful comment its very much appreciated.
Hugs
Jenn -
WELL DONE
Hi Jenni
I just came across your site and thought I'd read some of your work.
You say you write what you fell and you are not a poet. WOW just imagine how darn good you will be when you DO become a poet LOL...I totally enjoy the wAy you write and I will be reading more shortly.
Hugs
Jan -
It is only a fantasy Deke, a friend inspired me to write this, only he doesn't know it. Thank you for stopping by to visit, I really appreciate it, I will be by to visit you soon
Jenni
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I have a friend like this one that you write about. She is a great woman and the reason that I write; she is my inspiration. She encourages me like no one else, and my wife likes her too, but they are not as close as she and I are. She began telling me that I could write a book when it was hard for me to write essays for my Comp clases, but eventually she convinced me that I could. Now it has been published a little over one year. If it hadn't been for my friend, it would never have been written at all. I think I have the right idea as to what kind of friend you are talking about, but then again you might be talking about a lover/friend. My wife, though, is my lover and I want no other; she is also a friend, but she doesn't help in my writing at all. She just doesn't encourage me in any way; although, she probably wouldn't like hearing me say that. Thanks for a wonderful read.
Deke -
Oh my sweet Vic, you are such a Darling, you brighten my day when you leave such wonderful comments.
Jenny is another name for Jenni, Jenn, Jennifer, it's in the Rhyming Dictionary for poems and songs.
Now you know they're always for you
Thank you dear Vic for your comment.
Love Jenni
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well.. humn.. what to say, even though it is a fantasy, i cant really say that your should give all your trust on him.. sorry
nice write.. never seemed like out of the concept.. ..
by the way, i would like you to check the meaning of jenny in dictionary... well.. better it be oxford dictionary.. and yeah.. if you find the meaning.. then betta change jenny to jenni
tee hee
and by the way, if you write poems on me, there is no need to say its just a fantasy.. i wont mind it
.. u see. i am soo nice
nice write my dear jenni..
thanks for sharing...
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend...... just keep it up.... your humble litle friend....
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...... ..... - vic ( who else?)
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This is such a beautiful story. Sometimes friends cannot see the inner most part of a person but just see the outside. Love is a bonding of two souls into one. They share their innermost thoughts and feelings.. Your poem is as beautiful as love itself. You are such a gifted poet.. nice work my sweet...
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I really loved how you told the story, it's beautiful. Even though you say it's just a fantasy, it really seems as though you have experienced it and as I read your piece it seemed I was experiencing it also. Great job!
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Sincere
I love how you kept this piece positive with such a negative sounding phrase that we had to use. The flow was excellent and the story that it conveyed was beautiful. Wonderful emotion and very well thought out. Sounds like something you may have experienced yourself
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