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Chambers

truly en C hanting to those he surrounds
  a most c H arismatic existense, acclaimed and reknowned
    genuine, A dmirable talent dripping with allure.
      a quite mes M erizing presence delightful to endure
devours the chance to em B race each new adventure and role,
      a contagious, vivacious E nthusiastic soul.
                    Practically c R azy but never goes out of fashion
        a one of a kind beholder of pa S sion

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Written June 8th, 2005

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  • frecklez
    February 17, 2008

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    Wow. I've never seen a poem styled like this. The way you fit the first letters of "Cheambers" inside the lines rather than at the beginning is fabulously creative. <3

  • davidwright silver member
    February 16, 2008

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    An interesting play on words. Why the spacing and caps is this some special technique or a personal choice of graphic illustration. It reads well. Happy trails


  • MissteryousOne
    April 2, 2006
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    Thank you. I have tried to get it line up right but all poetry does seem to want to let me haha


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    April 2, 2006
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    i think that you have a unique acrostic form. i have tried to pull these off before and i have a difficult time doing so. i like this. really. i think that if you work with the form just a bit it will be really great. viyanna r langager