To slice a part of your sweet life
and mold it for my own
what I would give to have you reek
of soul's secreted stones;
of vengeance, unslakable truth
to bind you without need
to punish you for thoughts to come
and rules you did not heed;
and for a reason to be found
the poison will run dry
as soon as Revenga is struck
and down in Hell you lie.
Author notes
much love and enjoy 
Amritha
Written June 8th, 2005
A contest entry
- System Of A Down!!! by The Axe Shall Fall.
300 points, ended June 10, 2005, 7 entries
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Great poem on revenge. WE all feel like that at times...I guess... Liked it...
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Thank you so much Sau.
Yeah I wrote it when I was a bit pissed off about things in general-
Much love as always
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Hi Amritha,
This is powerful emotion... very well expressed. Seems like a volcano giving went to lava that was held for quite some time.
Good wishes,
Sau. -
yep same here bro 
yeah SOAD is awesome... 
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woot woot. very powerful write here and i can't say i didnt enjoy it
. system of a down is amazing...i wish i had entered that contest 
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well great job and keep up the good work...oh yeah and now i know what you look like!!!
Ben -
wow! this is very stong! I liked it!!!!
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Whoa, that was deep. I liked it though. You never cease to amaze me
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