what is today? the time-
the clock was never so alive
animated hands ticking every second
of my life, until it detonates and explodes
like a mini musical...with notes sprinkled upon
every page of music, with choruses singing loud and clear
but I still don't know the day today...I don't know what month or year
I don't know whether to laugh or cry, to be happy or to cry my heart out...
now that it's all over.
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much love and enjoy 
Amritha
Written June 8th, 2005
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3 stars ***
aha.. coming to your page was such a pleasure
well though to be honest this was a kinda creepy write.. i read it twice to get it in... but yeah.. i like it in the end.. nice diction .. and nice concept..
nice write...
thanks for sharing..
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend....... just keep it up...... your humble little friend.....
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...... ....... - vic ( who else?)
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Thanks so much for the applause and comments...much love Amritha
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Very decisive. You really captured the unclear message of what we percieve of time, feelings, and space. Great depth. You have such personality in a few tailored lines.
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Thank you so much Uncle...I'm fine much love as always
Amritha
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Superb!!!
Ammu, my lil girl, where do you get all these inspirations? Even on a day when you are so disillusioned you come up with a wonderful poem with so much emotion and sorrowful beauty in your words so wonderfully weaved.
Hope all is well with you, lil girl.
Love and blessings from India - Uncle - -
Thank you so much...much love Amritha
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that was nicely written, i enjoyed reading it, i hope that u continue to write so that u can expand even more as a writer, good job!
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