tonight if the time is right
I want to hold you.
feel your body close to me,
never to let you go.
Can I kiss you?
And have a taste of your love?
You're driving me crazy.
so I'll ask you again.
May we be lovers
and fill the night with romance?
I just want a taste of your love.
Is that too much to ask?
For now is the moment to live.
Not tomorrow.
for tomorrow may never come.
Yes...
we'll take things slowly.
I won't ask for promises.
But this I must know.
Does love live in your heart?
And if it does. may I share a taste of your love?
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Written June 8th, 2005
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Very charmingly written. Almost like a proposal that every female (or male...I guess, too perhaps) would like to receive from someone they wish to truly connect with. Drats! Would love someone like you on a romantic basis.
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this is incredibly sweet, longing and caring, you capture feelings well int his and explain them in such a gentle yet urgent way..beautiful work
thanks for sharing
as always shanelle -
the sweet taste of love
lingers in my mind
like a succulent tasty morsel
of the rarest kind
I've read this about four times now and to comment seems difficult at best. It's been a while since I've felt feelings like this towards anyone. I remember them, but they certainly haven't been physically present in awhile. This is beautiful. The imagery is very lifelike. Almost too much so!
You did a wonderful job here Bill.
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