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Insane

call me the crazy one,
throw me away
lead me to nowhere
ill guarentee that i stay
give me a room
white padding and all
because i'm insane
strangled like a rag doll
do what you wish to me
it eats me away
but i'm not aware
of this pain that you lay
this game that tortures
only makes me strong
keep playing and
you'll see i last long
because i have worse thoughts
than you want for me
i don't care if i die
takes away misery
so do what you must
that pleasures you so
i'm weak, but don't care
just watch as i go



 



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i am having a weird moment...
Written June 7th, 2005

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  • BeautifulAngelicSin
    June 26, 2005
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    Tnx for the comment on my poem.
    This is a great write. Reach for the stars and never stop writting.
    *Shanna*

  • MistressOfMeow
    June 8, 2005
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    interesting

    It blends and flows smoothly. It's quite good.