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Lost

Lost is the term
for those great many people
with no where to turn;
and yet...
I see myself with this group
uncertain
my life seems to be at an end.
No more paths to follow,
a dead end.

Scared.
I am scared;
Frightened
That I will
lose this battle;
With fear;
With myself.

Author notes

For the element of depression/suicide/cutting
Written June 7th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • ShadowStalker
    June 10, 2005
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    Wow. this had emotion in it. I didn't guess though that this was a suicide poem until you told me. This was short, but somethimes the best poems are. Good luck in the contest...you're going to do really well!


  • nobodys-girl
    June 7, 2005
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    wow i can really relate to this and understand the hopeless feeling.you did a really great job.thankyou for entering my contest and good luck!

    ~nobodys-girl~