Why Do You Cry For Me?
Why do you cry for me?
Because I too, was hurt like you.
Why do you cry for me?
No one cried for me.
Why do you cry for me?
I feel your pain.
Why do you cry for me?
I could not cry for me.
Why do you cry for me?
Because I care.
Why do you cry for me?
Because you are beautiful.
Why do you cry for me?
Because I love you.
Why do you cry for me?
Because I can.
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Written June 3rd, 2004
A contest entry
- Help me help someone else..... by Raggedy Ann.
300 points, ended June 16, 2005, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is good. i like it. it makes me think of all of my friends that i are worried about me. they want me to see what i'm doing is hurting me. but i don't see it as hurting me. i see it as a way to cope with life. with my life. well anyways...this is a great write. keep up the awesome writing.
jen -
this was a beautiful piece. i got confused until i read through to the end. then it began clear. it was a very touching piece.
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Wow, this was beautiful. Thank you for entering my contest!
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THis is such a touching piece...and even more so the story behind your words. You have done a wonderful job here..
I hope you will continue to write and share your words here with us all
welcome to allpoetry
~Kristy -
wow, i like it alot, not something i would really understand until i read your authors box, this is great keepup the great work, its awesome, and i hope shes okay, well... yea this is great and im jabbering now so keep up the good work and cant wait to read more of your work
kayla -
this is really good i liked this a lot....im gonna check out more of your work...
Great Write
<3 tiffa
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