Age is nothing
With monstrous dreams
Of stolen innocence
Haunting you continuously
Reliving daily
Hellish childhood times
Wondering through life
Consumed by anger
Engulfed in betrayal
Watching the world
Through tainted eyes
Unsure to trust
Scared to love
Self battering soul
Casting blame upon self
Not understanding
But always remembering
A darker time
When man acted out
It's most cruel act
During your age of innocence
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So don't tell Scotty
Written June 7th, 2005
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This is intense and sad to. The short lines make for a faster flow which I think works Very intense well done Very personal
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This is so sad =[ I, unfortunately, can relate way too much. This was so deep and upsetting. Great job. This isn't my first poem I've read of yours, just first I've commented on [yeah, I'm a lazy teenager], you're really talented. I envy your writing talent.
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This piece is so sad brought tears to my eyes. Every line piercing deep, so sharp the pain is. And the after effect that it's caused. Realising this pain makes a difference, won't make it go away but helps you handle and move on, and this is what you did here. Well done mummy,
Your Luna Angel
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very good poem
This piece says a lot about the feelings of an abused child which is carried on through life. I thought it was spot on, and very revealing. I did think that there could have been some periods and commas used. Just my opinion. -
this is a sad write that you penned beautifully a thread from the uncondcious coming through in a dream well done
love and light
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Sometimes men need to be castrated for taking away something so precious during your age of innocence. Sad but very emotional piece.
~Carrie
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