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Mirrored Images

You and me
North and South
Up and down
Completely opposite
Yet our hearts
Blackened and cold
Lonely and dying
Wanting and needing
Different we appear
On the outside
But look deeper
See beyond the wrapping paper
Sift through the package
And you will see
I am like you
And you are like me
Our hearts are simply
Mirrored Images

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Written June 7th, 2005

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  • coldhearted895
    December 23, 2006

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    Great

    I loved this poem. It said alot. My favorite part was...
    See beyond the wrapping paper
    Sift through the package
    And you will see
    I am like you

  • Tumbleweed
    June 10, 2005
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    This is nice, a great message and beautifully written Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.


  • Sunkissedrose
    June 7, 2005
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    Been a long time since I have seen you grace these fine pages. Nice to see you are still writing, and that your works are as good as ever. Welcome Back.


  • Cornell Brewer
    June 7, 2005
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    Good very good

    God work I really like this pome it shows you cannot judge a book by its cover