Why do I love thee?
Let me change the phrase-
You support me when I've no strength to stand,
You are always right behind me,
You adhere to my most harsh demand,
And when I'm angry, you dont mind me.
You've never been harsh, nor angry nor sad,
Youre devotion towards me is clear
And when I return from the tough day I had,
you protect and support my rear.
Oh my chair, how I love thee!
Author notes
Written June 7th, 2005
A contest entry
- unexpected love by lastresort.
300 points, ended June 13, 2005, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really enjoyed this poem. I loved the end it made me giggle
Good luck in the contest!
Hugs Nicci
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Great Work
Quite interesting poem! I liked it
Good Work! Good Luck on the contest
Keep it up!
-x- Sedusha -x-
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Loved your poem! Good luck in the contest!!!! Keep writing!!!
Somegirl1110 -
hah
har, that is all i can say [other than the words 'that is all i can say [and excluding 'other than the words 'that is all i can say' [and excluding 'and excluding 'other than the words 'that is all i can say' [and excluding 'and excluding 'other than the words 'that is all i can say' [and excluding 'and excluding 'other than the words 'that is all i can say' look im just gonna give up, but the thort 'hah still remailns]]]] -
This is so funny.
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sweet!!!
that is awsom you have some good support behind you
jennie -
Love it so true u can always relie on a chair to be there for u
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So weird, but I really really liked it.. made my day..lol. great write..
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Nicely written
This on made me chuckle at the end. Indeed, an awesome write. Nicely written. I love this one. Best of luck. Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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haha...that's awesome! here i thought it was a very sweet, innocent little ode to a loved one, and it turns out to be about a couple of boards put together...that's fabulous; nicely done!
good luck in the contest!
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