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Life as I remember it

I remember when life was so simple,
Times when stress was a word that went in one ear and out the other,
I remember warm summer days,
Days spent with my brother,
Playing baseball in the streets,
I remember those perfect days,
Days where in the middle of the game,
in just perfect timing, the rain begins to fall,
the perfect weather for a perfect game,
Those are the days I miss,
I yearn to be back there,
where summer days were filled with,
boogie boarding, boardwalks and tanning on the beach,
I remember my life as I love it, not as I live it.

Author notes

poem i wrote awhile back when i was waiting for my plane to head to florida on spring break.
Written April 8th, 2005

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  • trf415
    June 6, 2005
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    oiy, me too, lol
    -Tom