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Stubbornness

Stubbornness is the true sign of emotion,
The feeling when you want to find out the truth,
The truth from the only person who holds it
even though all the signs show it to be true,
Tossing the signs to the way side,
you continue to pursue deeper,
getting caught up in this crazy emotion,
Stubbornness can be fatal in its ways,
leading you to paths of destruction and despair,
yet those one in a million chances,
that millionth time can be bliss,
the question is,
will this stubbornness be that millionth?
or just another amongst it?

Author notes

somethin i wrote last night after gettin a frustrating e-mail from a friend
Written June 5th, 2005

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  • Anna Kay
    June 7, 2005
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    Subborness is quite fine, as long as you know when you have to let go (I don't). I liked that one a lot, especially the first few lines, it read a bit like looking at the truth from different persepectives. Great write indeed!

  • trf415
    June 6, 2005
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    u say stubborness can lead to destruction, welll cant eagerness also lead to destruction?
    i liked the word choice in this one
    -Tom