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Right Here Beside You

It all seems hopeless, as the sky falls aside you.
They taunt you, moch you, never leave you alone.
When problems seem to rain, all can be seen, Shown.
And you start to feel the pain, no one has ever known.
As you start to give up, life broken and thrown,
Always know where I am, Right here beside you.

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Written June 6th, 2005

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  • SilentFlyer
    June 8, 2005
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    This reminds me of a few people close to me. I might need to send this poem to them, since it seems to say what perhaps I might not have.