i pick up my shiny metal object,
i run it across my skin,
feeling a relief only you can bring.
my dear razor,
my sweet knife.
those who want me to stop,
obviously can't comprehend,
the release only you can bring.
the sweet feeling of my blood running,
the weight lifted off my sholders.
my dear razor,
my sweet knife.
Author notes
ummm yes. this is personal. it's true. don't comment on how this is stupid and how i should stop or you will get a very rude response.
Written June 6th, 2005
A contest entry
- dont piss me off by dusted faerie216.
400 points, ended June 13, 2005, 5 entries
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this was fantastic, i love your style of writing. so dark, i write the same way... your a great poet so keep up the great writing...
Krissy -
What has happened to poetry?
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The poem is really good. I like how you stated that those who ask to stop don't know the true emotion of it. I know how you feel about the weight being lifted, and the feeling of it being good. If you ever need someone to go to you can always IM me, and not only on AP. You can contact me at Celticgoddess718.
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its not stupid, and you should only stop if you want to...or someone is threatening you with counselling. (MY mummy) cutting is a personal thing, and it does feel really good. but only someone that has done it can really understand, so when people call you sick or fucked up, dont listen to them.
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Good.
Hey, I actually liked this poem. I know how it is to have people to bitch about how you need to stop, but I feel the same way. So yeah, just wanted to let you know that all in all this was a good write. Keep up the good work, and good luck. Au revoir. <3.
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