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missing.

So cold
So lonely
So used
So morbid

I try
Can't help
Dying slowly
Tearing apart
Inside.

So ugly
So worthless
So unkept
So weak

I try
Can't help
Eating away
No passion
Can't
Take
It.

So hurt
So empty
So angry
So loveless


Alone.

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Written June 6th, 2005

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  • candy-coated-razors
    March 1, 2007
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    that was great keep up the good work come see some of my work if you get a moment...


  • March 9, 2006
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    awwwww steph thats a good peom! keep it up ca't wait to write your next poem lots of luv clare x x x x x


  • C.W. Bush
    June 8, 2005
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    Hugs

    I'm sorry you feel this way. I can most definitely relate. This was brilliantly formed, poetically speaking. It was like the person's life breath was ebbing from them as they spoke. Loved it, at the same time as hating that you can feel this way.

    You know you can talk to me if you need to.