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Courtney

a blazing white fire
could only cool her down
she's gorgeous with a smile
she's cute with a frown
when she tries, she's sexy
her body is perfection
and every move she makes
i head in that direction

hello, my name is Sam
but i relate myself to Courtney
this girl is my obsession
it's somewhat like a sport, see
i'll see how far i'll go
or how far i can make it
i've seen her with her child
and plenty of times naked
i've seen her with her fingers
i've seen her with a man
but she's never seen me
my trail's spick and span
it is my sick compulsion
to watch her in the dark
i follow this girl everywhere
at home - at work - at parks

i've never really done
so mostly i just watch
as a baby in my carriage
no one ever stopped
nobody ever said
"this baby is adorable"
my child years were bad
but my teen years were horrible
my nose is kind of big
my forehead sort of tall
my face was full of acne
my manly organ, small
nobody ever looked
nobody ever crushed
they only called me names
nobody gave a fuck
i never had a kiss
not even from my mother
since i was neglected never learned the bread and butter
many tears i cried
and many drugs i took
until Courtney moved in
then my heart was shook
she saves me from myself
even though she doesn't know
all she has to do for me
is let her beauty show
Courtney is my girlfriend
as far as i'm concerned
and it will stay that way
unless somehow she learns...

Author notes

Sam's
 A
   Sick
     Stalker
Written June 6th, 2005

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  • Pyro-Paige420
    July 23, 2005
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    aww I wish I had someone like you for me...read my poetry and youll know what I mean


  • Thoughtful Seeker
    July 8, 2005
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    wow wow wow ,creepy!!

    wow lith,this is a creepy poem about stalking someone,lol i enjoyed reading it. it almost makes you feel sorry for someone desperate and lonely like that.almost.... i said great job,keep it up!! your the best janny/wicker


  • My Girl
    July 5, 2005
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    this was amazing lithium. It was totally a view i've never seen beofre in a poem. Stalkers are pretty sick and really scary. Great write about one of them though. With love alwyas torie


  • LdyBrknWing gold member
    July 2, 2005
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    Wow! Intense, my friend! Those first two lines pulled me in, and I couldn't stop reading! This is a brilliant look into the mind of a stalker! Very scary! Excellent work!
    Paula

  • Spoonerism
    June 29, 2005
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    Quality

    this is sum chronic shit. I never really thought about stalking someone to get u off the drugs. maybe i should try it.......


  • June 18, 2005
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    wow
    Edited on Jun 18, 7:30 p.m. because 'i dunno'.


  • MissingBatteries
    June 17, 2005
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    damn boy, you can write...I still am interested as to why you deleted all your old stuff. It made me sad . Anyway, good job .


  • FineDarkMoments
    June 15, 2005
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    Excellent

    This was...yeah...well....to be honest
    I really really liked it....This is probably the first piece i've read on someone stalking a person, but you described it well, you have a great talent with words


  • FallingSideways silver member
    June 11, 2005
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    SPIFFTACULAR


    I found a lot of underlying humor to this... but perhaps thats just my sick dark mind for ya
    Either way... spiff write!
    Honestly it was a very novel concept with excellent imagery and flow... Sucked me right in
    Many applauses

  • nolonger
    June 8, 2005
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    This was a brilliant write, If its true then its a story all in its self. If you conjured this, Then wow. you have great imagination, Great write. I wanted to stay away, BUt so far I cant

  • ScottWest
    June 7, 2005
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    that was good. lol I knew you still had shit in you! Is sam real or is he just somthin you made up for the hell of it? Cause that was a good write. Anyway, I gotta go read some more so PEACE!

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