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Darkness Rising

Darkness dancing
Feet prancing
Laughter echoing in the shadows
Chains rattle
Moans like cattle
Giggling echoing in the shadows
Feel the pain
Pouring down like rain
Pleasure echoing in the shadows
Til the morning rises
Bringing surprises
As the shadows fade away

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Written June 6th, 2005

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