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This heart

With a stroke of my wrist,
I'll say it like this.
With a stroke of my pen,
I'll say it again.
This world is a crazy place,
but in your arms i find peace and  grace.
This heart is filled with love so pure
Your kiss is my lifetime cure.

Author notes

I wrote this for my boyfriend.. its not great but no words could possibly describe my feelings for him.
Written May 31st, 2005

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  • outofthedark
    July 15, 2005
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    this poem is, as the author above me puts it, "so cute". i loved reading it and it sounds like you two lovebirds last forever.

    ps- thank u so much for your comment on my recent poem!


    -meg

  • Silver Kitsune
    June 6, 2005
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    Love It

    this is a very cute poem lol I really enjoy reading this and hope that you both together forever

    ~*~Mina~*~

  • kryswriter
    June 6, 2005
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    a very sweet poem. (this is how i was with my boyfriend when we first started dating...and i still am!) clearly this guy is someone you care a great deal about. i'm sure he'll like it. thanks for sharing it with us. good luck in your relationship!

  • Distances Lonliness
    June 6, 2005
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    wonderful

    aww this poem is sooo sweet I really love this very much Awsome write lol

    Lina


  • help unwanted
    June 6, 2005
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    i know how you feel...

  • feldspaths
    June 6, 2005
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    hey! never thought i would still read love poems again. It's simple, yes, but so sweet also i like it. and good luck in your relationship.

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