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alone

forsaken by my father,
forsaken by my mother,
abandoned by all who know me.
i am alone.

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umm just a quickie. im feeling shitty.
Written June 5th, 2005

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  • OneMorePeacefulDay
    June 5, 2005
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    "I'm never alone, I'm alone all the time."


  • June 5, 2005
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    Mmhmm. Obviously, you feel alone. If you ever feel the urge to let it out, IM me.