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this joker will be on his way

i love you and nothing can change what we had
even when things get this bad
i still want to walk back in to your arms
open up to your smile and turn on the charm
we have walked down many a rough road together
this time do you think our love will weather

i know what i want and it will take only a word to turn away
but god knows that in my heart i want to stay
you are the magic in my life
the butter for my knife
every time i see your bright smileing face
you lift me up from this broken place
this is my final plee
can you still love me ??

would you want to rekindal this light
to make up every time we have a little fight
and hope one day that we can sleep through the night
would you want to take this walk with me
because you told me that you will always love me

i have been changeing my whole being
and this is one fight that is worth seeing
but i am not going to sit back and watch me lose the best thing
becuase how can i lose the girl that makes my heart sing

but princess i can't keep crying these tears of pain
each night its getting harder and harder to maintain
should i stay or should i walk away
all you have to do is just say
then this joker will be on his way

Author notes

this is shows how much i love this girl i just don;t want to give it up after she hurt me so bad, this is love or stupidity, hey i got to take a chance some time
Written June 5th, 2005

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  • fathom me
    June 8, 2005
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    hie D!
    is this love adding something from your life or substracting??? you very well know what to do.. you just needto 100% stick to one thing i suppose! so best luck!

  • BlueEyesCrying
    June 5, 2005
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    "i love you and nothing can change what we had
    even when things get this bad
    i still want to walk back in to your arms
    open up to your smile and turn on the charm
    we have walked down many a rough road together
    this time do you think our love will weather"

    I honestly was not sure what to think about this title before I started reading, but I was really surprised. I love the beginning that opened it, it just kind of showed how you care, and the end here...

    "but princess i can't keep crying these tears of pain
    each night its getting harder and harder to maintain
    should i stay or should i walk away
    all you have to do is just say
    then this joker will be on his way"

    Was very strong, and it made us feel your pain in a way. I love it. Keep it up and I hope all goes well for you no matter what.

    *~*Ash*~*